Miss Dower: Great story Peng. I love how you have included an exclamation mark - well done. I have highlighted some missing capital letters. Can you please edit this to show where the capital letters should be (at the start of a sentence).
Monday, 28 July 2014
crazy critters by Peng
We're making our own crazy critter in the afternoon. We are painting our background and we need to draw our crazy critters and use oil pastels to colour in. We need to write a short sentence about what your crazy critter eats, what are its enemies. Then we need to cut it out and then we glue the crazy critter on the background. Then the teacher helps us to glue our writing under the background, and then glue our crazy critter's background on a piece of big black paper, then we're done!
Miss Dower: Great story Peng. I love how you have included an exclamation mark - well done. I have highlighted some missing capital letters. Can you please edit this to show where the capital letters should be (at the start of a sentence).
Miss Dower: Great story Peng. I love how you have included an exclamation mark - well done. I have highlighted some missing capital letters. Can you please edit this to show where the capital letters should be (at the start of a sentence).
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Well done Peng, you have corrected all your capital letters!
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