My day at the zoo

When it was time to go to school on Monday, I was excited. The day had come! I packed my bag, thinking about how much fun it would be. When I reached school, I spent the start of the day thinking about the trip. 

        I stepped into the classroom. Miss Dower did the roll and we waited for the bus to come. When the bus came, we sat in it and did our own things while waiting to reach.

When we reached, we got split up into groups. I was in Angela's group. we got to look around before going to the central part of the zoo to meet up. We looked at some of the animals, such as baboons (which apparently have red butts), tigers and elephants. WOW! they were so big!

10 a.m. It was time to meet at the central park. Peng helped us find the way using the map. We ate morning tea there.

After morning tea, we got to have some more time to look around. we wanted to see the red pandas but they would not let us (for some reason), so we went to look at the Sumatran tigers instead.

Our time is up! we went to the rare animals enclosure. I did not see a Morepork but at least I saw a Kiwi.

That is the end of my trip to the zoo! Thank you! 

my narative about lego

yesterday i woke up as a yellow person and the world was made out of bricks.the sea was made of blue studs and my mum's car was made out of bricks my first thought of the world was.....minecraft umm lego thats it.im lego!!!!!!!this is good but i cant feel my hair because its plastic!! i had some holes in me which was extremley crazy i coudn't belive i was lego for a day i mean im lego everthing is lego the world is lego this is crazy its like a dream but so real cause im already awake! so it cant be a dream its real and unbealevable! andre was thinking the same as me.THIS IS CRAZY! and unbeleavable.

Miss Dower: Well done boys. Can you please edit this to add in the correct capital letters and make sure there is a spacebar between new sentences.

Girls Dance

This year the seniors decided to have a girl dance it was a pretty good dance we proformed on our proforming arts night our song was jessie j price tag. Our costume was pretty funny it was a black and white skirt and a white singlet black pants a swag hat and price tags hanging off our hats we all wore loom bands. We were so nerveous but when we got up there we were having such a good time. When we finished the croud clapped very loud and we all couldn't belive we did that in frount of everyone.

the first day at camp!

It was camp! We were all very excited! We had to wake up really early because we did not want to be caught in the traffic.We were going to a small city called Matamata which is near rotorua .
It took a really long time to get there it seems like hours and hours!
But we finally got there.

We got our luggage out of the bus and headed to the direction of the cabins so we could settle in and put our bags down.Then it was morning tea. We each lined up to get a cookie and a piece of fruit.Then the teachers said to all of us to get ready for our first activities my groups were
kayaking!I was nervous, but at the same time excited! It got really wet but did quite well and we were all really exusted, and was happy it was lunch!After lunch we got free time.Every one rushed for the hydro slide! It was soooooo fun. We went down so many times we lost count!
there was also the hot pools where most of the adults went to relax in.
then shortly after it was delicious dinner! We got to wear P'Js's when we ate which was a bit weird at first.
Then we had a movie night. we watched Dispicable me.then we went to bed.

SNOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!

The Zoo

On Monday the Senior and Middle school went to the ZOO! There was a lot of traffic so it was pretty boring. The traffic was like a herd of hungry elephants, finally the traffic disappeared in the city so we were free to go. We were all excited to see all the animals, I was looking forward to seeing the seals. We all got out and sat in our class and had a talk about where not to go and the rules of the zoo.

I was with Miss Dower and Aidan, Reisan, Jadyn, Mitchell and we also had Miss Lister, Miss Wright and some pupils from room 3. The teachers were having trouble when it was time to go so we called ourselves The Avengers. Everybody chose the Hulk, Miss Dower chose the Human Torch of Fantastic Four, I was Iron Man and Rayne was Black Widow because she was the only girl in the group.

The first animal we saw was the Giraffes there were two baby Giraffes that chased each other in there enclosure. Then we saw the Zebras they were Zoes favourite. We went through all the african animals and headed to the deers and Rhinos. There horns were as sharp as a razor blade. It wasn't that amusing to see a big thing just sir there eating, so we moved on  s 

Miss Dower: Great start Baylin, I like the simile you have included in your first paragraph. Don't forget to double check your capital letters, I have highlighted a few questionable ones for you to check.


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room 1's camp

In week there of May, Aidan and I went on camp. When we arrived we unpacked and went to our cabins and we assembled in our activity groups. Aidan did kayaking first down the river. He went down first. The current was really strong.Marcus managed to get up the current. abseiling wasn't a problem at all after I got the hang of it . I thought the go karts were wicked .They were quite fast and had good handling.The next day me and adian decided to go on the waterslide  I did a train with Henry and Thomas  the Oder we went in went like this Me,Henry and Thomas .We went up the coners and fast on the straights really quickly .The day after that the waterslide was closed so I went in the hot pool . Later we packed up and went home I went home in my mum's car adian went home in the bus.He had to let the sick kids out to spew. He had a sad jounery back and that was 2014 room 1's camp trip

THE BEST CAMP EVER

Hi our names are Kyla and Sahej  

On Tuesday room  1, 2, 3, 4, and 9  went on camp. Mrs Wood, our teacher told  us to get in our activity

groups then get on the bus. We were all so excited we had to first say good bye to our parents then we went. It was so fun on the bus because..... After a long bus ride we finally got there!


Great Start Girls, don't forget to think of some great adjectives to describe camp. Can you think of a better word than fun? Add detail so the reader has a clear picture reading your story - why was it fun on the bus? Miss Dower

At the zoo

On Monday room1 went to the zoo. First we had to call the roll then we got into our group I was with Alex, Andre, and Christopher. After we got into our groups we lined up outside and went on the bus I sat next to Alex we played apple on a stick. After that we just talked we finally got there. When we got we got there we sat down in our lines and talked about some rules. After that we got to look around we first looked at the zebras and the Giraffes

Kyla

Miss Dower: Great start Kyla, can you please check your sentences aren't too long. You could add a comma or full stop in to shorten them. Remember to keep it short and include your favourite parts.

Take Off!!!

"Ooh Ahh'' Mr B was lifting a piece of what looked a bit like a tissue. It was actually made out of plastic called Nano-fiber which sticks to human skin like tape. We got to hold couple of items like a square shaped figure which was bulletproof, we all stared in amazement as a bullet had been shot straight into it not a scratch or mark just a hole. Facts and facts flew past us.

 Then Mr B pulled out a rocket with the word AMAZON written on the side "Alright" said Mr B "We are going to go outside and I'm going to show you how a real rocket works." The room flooded with excitement. Rushing out the door the senior school filled with joy.  We took our shoes off and we placed them outside of our class. We gathered on the field standing 5 meters away from the rocket. We started with a countdown 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0 the rocket shot off like a bullet heading towards the sky.

The parachutes nose popped off and the parachute deployed leaving a trail of smoke. We surrounded the rocket and leaking out was the smoke.

Magic The Gathering

I was at the cafe just bought a fat pack i started opening it first pack was good second pack was better and third was epic and so on i got in my car to go to my local game store in the corner there was a $5 deck so why not i bought it i got back in my car and opened it "wow! a $50 dollar card" i yelled and once again "wow" there were really expensive cards "the whole deck could be worth $1000" i said to my self i was going home and went to bed the deck started to shake in the middle of the night I woke up and saw it making a portal I tried to run out of the house but the portal pulled me in and I was gone the portal turned into a spark then dust I woke up in a swamp I heard twigs snap "ROAR!" I made a run for it a giant beast was behind me called a godsend I jumped over a log the godsend roared again I then fell in a pool the godsend stopped and roared in the middle of the roar the godsend fell into the pool garruk apex predator stood there I ran in a cave garruk was gaining on me i made a fire on a stick and threw it at garruk I walked back garruk grabbed his axe and went to smash me but before he smashed me a legendary person came and saved my life her name is elspeth she blocked the axe with her sword I ran deeper in the cave but i saw light i went towards it it was a short cut to ravnica i had no choice i ditched elspeth and went to ravnica 


Great story Dino, what a creative imagination you have! I love how you have used speech marks and punctuated them correctly.

Next Steps:

• Add full stops to mark the end of sentences
• Correct capital letters for 'I', names and start of sentences

Rockets

On Tuesday a man who designed rockets came in and showed us his model rocket. First he set up the launch pad then put the cables together, then he did a 10 second countdown and then zoom the rockets shoot 60 feet of the ground in a second. Then the parachute popped out. It hurt your ears when it shot up into the sky. It smelt like Rotorua after it landed, the rocket only worked once. I can't wait to design my rocket I'm very excited. James and I are designing our rockets on Friday. I wanted to have a small rocket but  there was a restricted height, half a meter so I had to extend my design because it wasn't tall enough. James is doing well on his design. He made his design quite well.

3! 2! 1! BLAST OFF Reisan&Mitchell

At school there was this tall guy he was holding a gigantic plastic box, "I wonder what's in there?" questioned Mitchell. When the guy was staring at him, a couple of minutes later he pulled all these different stuff out of a smaller cardboard box and everybody was so interested in the stuff but then every thing got A LOT better  when he pulled out a AWESOME MINIATURE ROCKET, and when he said he was going to launch the rocket and wooooh everybody  screamed. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 BLAST OFF we all screamed as the rocket fired into the air with a boom there was a trail of smoke behind it.We had so much fun watching the rocket

THE END