The Zoo

On Monday the Senior and Middle school went to the ZOO! There was a lot of traffic so it was pretty boring. The traffic was like a herd of hungry elephants, finally the traffic disappeared in the city so we were free to go. We were all excited to see all the animals, I was looking forward to seeing the seals. We all got out and sat in our class and had a talk about where not to go and the rules of the zoo.

I was with Miss Dower and Aidan, Reisan, Jadyn, Mitchell and we also had Miss Lister, Miss Wright and some pupils from room 3. The teachers were having trouble when it was time to go so we called ourselves The Avengers. Everybody chose the Hulk, Miss Dower chose the Human Torch of Fantastic Four, I was Iron Man and Rayne was Black Widow because she was the only girl in the group.

The first animal we saw was the Giraffes there were two baby Giraffes that chased each other in there enclosure. Then we saw the Zebras they were Zoes favourite. We went through all the african animals and headed to the deers and Rhinos. There horns were as sharp as a razor blade. It wasn't that amusing to see a big thing just sir there eating, so we moved on  s 

Miss Dower: Great start Baylin, I like the simile you have included in your first paragraph. Don't forget to double check your capital letters, I have highlighted a few questionable ones for you to check.


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