At the zoo

On Monday room1 went to the zoo. First we had to call the roll then we got into our group I was with Alex, Andre, and Christopher. After we got into our groups we lined up outside and went on the bus I sat next to Alex we played apple on a stick. After that we just talked we finally got there. When we got we got there we sat down in our lines and talked about some rules. After that we got to look around we first looked at the zebras and the Giraffes

Kyla

Miss Dower: Great start Kyla, can you please check your sentences aren't too long. You could add a comma or full stop in to shorten them. Remember to keep it short and include your favourite parts.