Magic The Gathering

I was at the cafe just bought a fat pack i started opening it first pack was good second pack was better and third was epic and so on i got in my car to go to my local game store in the corner there was a $5 deck so why not i bought it i got back in my car and opened it "wow! a $50 dollar card" i yelled and once again "wow" there were really expensive cards "the whole deck could be worth $1000" i said to my self i was going home and went to bed the deck started to shake in the middle of the night I woke up and saw it making a portal I tried to run out of the house but the portal pulled me in and I was gone the portal turned into a spark then dust I woke up in a swamp I heard twigs snap "ROAR!" I made a run for it a giant beast was behind me called a godsend I jumped over a log the godsend roared again I then fell in a pool the godsend stopped and roared in the middle of the roar the godsend fell into the pool garruk apex predator stood there I ran in a cave garruk was gaining on me i made a fire on a stick and threw it at garruk I walked back garruk grabbed his axe and went to smash me but before he smashed me a legendary person came and saved my life her name is elspeth she blocked the axe with her sword I ran deeper in the cave but i saw light i went towards it it was a short cut to ravnica i had no choice i ditched elspeth and went to ravnica 


Great story Dino, what a creative imagination you have! I love how you have used speech marks and punctuated them correctly.

Next Steps:

• Add full stops to mark the end of sentences
• Correct capital letters for 'I', names and start of sentences