my adventure on camp

Camp

I was so excited to go on camp! When I got  there I was amazed it was nothing like I imagined but it was still as awesome as I thought. Anyway we went to our cabin my cabin was 1c at Totara springs. The first activity my group did was crate climbing we were only allowed to do 10 crates because there was not enough time. After crate climbing we got into our pjs and went out for dinner. It was yum. After dinner it was bed it was a bit earlier than my normal bed time but that doesn't matter because we got a few minutes  to talk. In the morning we had about 10 minutes to get ready and go to our activity. My cabin group is Kiara, Gabby, Alex, Rayne and  Marcia where all best friends. Me and Gabby are the only year 5 and were the bestest friends forever. After our first activity we did another activity then we had some morning tea it was cookies yum yum. After morning tea was another activity I forgot what it was but it was still fun because they were all fun but my favorite one isn't actually an activity   it's the hydro slide and one that is an activity the flying fox both of them I was scared at first but I did them and had the time of my life. CAMP WAS AWESOME!



Peer Assessor: Andre "What i like about your blog is that you added lots of detail and it is very interesting."

Miss Dower: Great story Zoe. I agree with Andre, your blog is interesting because it shows your personal voice. I have highlighted two areas for you to work on. The yellow highlighted bits are letters that should be capitals. Remember an I on its own is always a capital letter. The green highlighted words are contractions that are missing their apostrophe. A contraction is two words that join together to make a shorter word (eg. was + not = wasn't). Can you please go back through your blog and see if you can add the apostrophes in the correct place.